Last summer, I stayed at home, I didn’t work because the only thing I wanted to do
was rest. Almost all day I played long time videogames or saw a lot of movie
and series. Others day I went with my friend to ride a bike, the road was
beginning in my house and finish in Parque Bustamante, the return was very
tiring. Generally January is usually a month where I play a lot of football. On
that moth also I met with my friends every Friday´s night, were going to the
billiard and then to my friend’s house to have fun.
I went to the
beach with my family during February, specifically I went to Las Cruces, because
in this place my father spent his childhood. Las Cruces is located in V region,
is near to El Tabo, Cartagena and the San Antonio port.
First of all, I
have to say that I don´t like too much the beach, there isn’t my favorite place
to go to vacation. To reach Las Cruces, we went by my father´s car in a no
longer travel. In Las Cruces we stayed in a nice rented house. The things that I
did in those weeks were generally the same: in the morning, have a breakfast and
running a little. In the afternoon, go to the beach, here swimming a little and
sleep. At night go to the ‘amusement park’ and play the classic card games with
family. One of best thing that I liked about the holidays was I ate many
delicious things.
The most
important part of the vacation was that I could relax my mind and body. In
conclusion, I had a quiet holiday with family and friends were passed many good
things.
Cristopher,
ResponderEliminarOverall, it's a good entry, I see your writing is getting better. However, you need to check some things, like "In this summer, January was spent at home",
it'd be better to say: " Last summer, I stayed at home in January". Simple, direct, straight to the point. Check the past tense: "the things that I DID"... and some words, like "I went to the BLEACH," (BEACH?) "BILLAR" is "BiLLIARD" Iin English. You can find it easily in Word Reference.
Please, check these things. It would have been nice if you had included some photographs...
Regards,
JC