martes, 25 de marzo de 2014

Summer 2014


Last summer, I stayed at home, I didn’t work because the only thing I wanted to do was rest. Almost all day I played long time videogames or saw a lot of movie and series. Others day I went with my friend to ride a bike, the road was beginning in my house and finish in Parque Bustamante, the return was very tiring. Generally January is usually a month where I play a lot of football. On that moth also I met with my friends every Friday´s night, were going to the billiard and then to my friend’s house to have fun.
I went to the beach with my family during February, specifically I went to Las Cruces, because in this place my father spent his childhood. Las Cruces is located in V region, is near to El Tabo, Cartagena and the San Antonio port.
First of all, I have to say that I don´t like too much the beach, there isn’t my favorite place to go to vacation. To reach Las Cruces, we went by my father´s car in a no longer travel. In Las Cruces we stayed in a nice rented house. The things that I did in those weeks were generally the same: in the morning, have a breakfast and running a little. In the afternoon, go to the beach, here swimming a little and sleep. At night go to the ‘amusement park’ and play the classic card games with family. One of best thing that I liked about the holidays was I ate many delicious things.

The most important part of the vacation was that I could relax my mind and body. In conclusion, I had a quiet holiday with family and friends were passed many good things.

 

 

1 comentario:

  1. Cristopher,

    Overall, it's a good entry, I see your writing is getting better. However, you need to check some things, like "In this summer, January was spent at home",
    it'd be better to say: " Last summer, I stayed at home in January". Simple, direct, straight to the point. Check the past tense: "the things that I DID"... and some words, like "I went to the BLEACH," (BEACH?) "BILLAR" is "BiLLIARD" Iin English. You can find it easily in Word Reference.

    Please, check these things. It would have been nice if you had included some photographs...

    Regards,

    JC

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